Saturday, February 12, 2011

Saturday Centus - Flames of Love - A Valentine

Jenny Matlock

It's Saturday Centus time, and this week Jenny Matlock has come up with a dilly of a prompt.  Write a verse, (50 words or less), for a Valentine card to match the picture below.  (Wherever did she find a pup with 'bedroom' eyes???)  My humble submission is below the picture.


I want to be your super hero.

Let's not waste time, fiddling like Nero.

We don't look like swells or even like yuppies,

But between us I'm sure that we'd have cute puppies.

 Come be my love, and I'll take you higher.

Together we'll start our own kind of fire.


I need to apologize for not making the rounds to read and comment on other submissions in the past week or so.  I've been ill of late and have not been up to spending much time on the computer.  Didn't even get to do a post myself last week...Bummer.  I'll try to do better this week and make the rounds.  The only thing that would prevent this from happening, would be if I'm packing for the move to Kansas City.  You see, I've included this gem in my portfolio and mailed it off to Hallmark Crown Center this morning.  I'm just sure I'll get an immediate response!

The rest of you 
can should read the other valentine verses by clicking on the Saturday Centus button at the top of the page.  Please do that.  We all live for comments.

Happy Valentine's Day!

21 comments:

  1. Hahah! "Come on, baby, light my fire!" Great take!!!

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  2. By 'bedroom eyes', did you mean the look I get when my husband turns on the bedroom light and wakes me up from a dead sleep?

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  3. Ahhhhh... I love this one...sweet take on the prompt ! I hope you feel better real soon too.
    Hugs,
    Nonna

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  4. I didn't realise you had to link it to the picture!! Well done!

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  5. Teeee heeee

    Very funny. Love the take on the Doors song.

    Donna V.
    http://donnasbookpub.blogspot.com

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  6. light my fire baby!!! and yeah, now i have a hankering to see little puppy babies ... such a cool take on the prompt!

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  7. It's the Doors! The Doggie Doors!!

    heehee

    ;)

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  8. I love this! I read it to my dog and she loved it! Very clever! Thanks for stopping by my blog and giving me some valentine love!

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  9. ooh la la. loved the way that one was going.

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  10. Ooooh...got my embers burning! hee hee hee!

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  11. That line about cute puppies is great, and the last line is steamy.
    I really enjoyed this.
    I hope you feel better.
    xoRobyn

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  12. Nice rhyming. I am behind on my reading too. You'll catch up! Those mutt eyes are sultry aren't they!~Ames

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  13. Even my cat liked this. And she doesn't like anything! Cute take on the prompt. Glad you're feeling better. And good luck on your move :) Kat

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  14. Ooooh ... a sultry pug, well done!

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  15. Way to go...I am sure Doors would have echoed your sentiment...A card I just might buy..

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  16. This is just great! I didn't dare attempt a poem, let alone rhyming verse, but you pulled it off in stupendous fashion! Excellent work!

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  17. Making puppies huh? Adorable and fun!

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  18. I loved this!

    I hope you're feeling all better now.

    Thanks for being such a good sport about this funny challenge. I've been reading through these on a dreary Arizona Saturday afternoon and laughing like a crazy person!

    What fun!

    Thanks for linking up. Love your 'making puppies' line!

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